Saturday, September 29, 2012
Day14 : Library Day Review
Day14 : Library Day Review
It was really informative and productive.
I hope everybody learned something new.
Please make the best use of what we learned.
Tuesday, September 25, 2012
Day14 : Library Day
Day14 : Library Day
Objectives :
- better understand the academic research process
- effectively search for information using library databases.
- HOMEWORK :
Please click the link below.Get your questions ready! :)https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0Av0Ji-sKFWRkdFozNmpCREVhRHBHUUhyXzJGbHY2SWc - TIMEPlease do NOT BE LATE.
Sept. 28th, Friday, at 4pm sharp,
if you are late it will be tardy or absent. - LOCATION
Come DIRECTLY to the ACES Library, Room 509
Graduate Assistant "Ashley Booth" will teach us. :)
ACES Library, Information and Alumni Center
1101 South Goodwin Avenue
Urbana, IL 61801 |
Click the following link to the map.
http://illinois.edu/map/view?buildingId=377&ACTION=MAP
DO NOT come to G3, FLB. Nobody’s will be there!
Day13 : Choosing a Topic
Day13 : Choosing a Topic
- Review : What is a good topic?
- Group Sharing and Discussion
- Group Presentation : The Best Topic
- Vote
- Decision
- Homework
- To-do List
- Check the location of the library on the map.
- Prepare at least one question to the instructor. J
- Follow the link and get your question ready! https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0Av0Ji-sKFWRkdFozNmpCREVhRHBHUUhyXzJGbHY2SWc#gid=0
Sunday, September 23, 2012
Day12 : Research Process & Problem-Solution Paper
Day12 : Research Process & Problem-Solution Paper
Objectives :
1. Get excited about writing their own research paper and take their role of writer seriously.
2. Identify some distinguishing characteristics of an analytical research paper.
3. Indicate the various steps involved when writing a research paper and the order in which they occur
- Attendance Check
- Review - Differences between an essay and a research paper
- Sponge Bob Video and Quick Discussion
- Group Timeline/Ordering ActivityPut the cards into the correct process of the research paper andwrite 1-2 sentences explaining the significance or meaning of each step.
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Watch this video of a professor talking about her research.How does she define her research interests?[First 42 seconds of the interview with Professor Janelle Scott talking about her research interests in the politics of education (K12), elite vs. grassroots, and charter schools: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZtWgQHdVOmg ]
- Homework : Choosing a Topic
Click and download the PPT file about "Choosing a Topic."
Watch the PPT. Please bring 2 topics to the next class.
Use the checklist to see how each topic fits the criteria. - Also, go to the Google Drive and fill in the cells with your 2 topics.
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0Av0Ji-sKFWRkdHZyaHBRZTg2akM4S3plM3BvVzRyeUE
¤Significant
¤Solvable
¤Not
to broad or too narrow
¤Of
interest to you and the general public
¤Diverse
sources
¤Causes
and effects
Saturday, September 22, 2012
Day11 : Differences Between Essay and Research Paper
Day11 : Differences Between Essay and Research Paper
- Carefully read an excerpt of an essay and a research paper.
- Click the following links to download the necessary documents and form. 1) Excerpt from an essay 2) Excerpt from a research paper 3) Differences Chart
- Read the excerpts carefully.
- Analyze in terms of length, formality, source usage and outline structure.
- Complete the “Differences Chart” and upload it to your dropbox folder
- by Sep. 23th, 11:59pm, Sunday.
- Name the file “Differences_btw_essay_research_Yourname.doc.”
Thursday, September 20, 2012
Day11 : APA Formatting for Research Papers
Day11 : APA Formatting for Research Papers
Objectives :
1. Learn the basic formatting rules required for academic papers
– font, spacing, alignment, margins, and indentation
2. Find multiple ways to execute the formatting in Microsoft Word
3. Practice applying the formatting settings to sample texts
- Attendance Checking
- Review : Final Diagnostic
- APA Formatting : Jigsaw Activity
- Homework : Differences between Essays and Research Papers
✭ LIBRARY DAY ANNOUNCEMENT
•Sept.
28th,
Friday,
at
4pm sharp,
if you are late it will be tardy or absent.
Please do NOT BE LATE.
Please do NOT BE LATE.
•Come DIRECTLY to
the ACES Library, Room 509
DO NOT come here.
Nobody’s will be here.
the ACES Library, Room 509
DO NOT come here.
Nobody’s will be here.
Wednesday, September 19, 2012
Day10 : Homework
Day10 : Homework
1. About Plagiarism Online Tutorial
I forgot to collect all the homework today. (Yes i was too excited about peer-review!)
Thanks to Anqi for reminding me of the worksheet. I will be collecting those again on Friday. If you are not finished yet,
and if you EVEN lost the paper, please download here ONLINE TUTORIAL
2. Revised Final Draft of Diagnostic
Make sure you take into account several points mentioned in your peer-review form.
Please revise and proofread your draft again, so that you can finalize the essay.
It is due tomorrow night, which is Sep. 20th, Thursday, 11:59PM.
REMEMBER! This will be 10% of your final grade.
No excuses for plagiarism and late work.
3. Remember to bring your peer-review forms back to class on Friday.
Tuesday, September 18, 2012
Day10 : Peer Review
Day10 : Peer Review
OBJECTIVES
1. Understand the 5W1H of peer review and the relevant feedback.
2. Discuss language expressions and strategies used in peer review.
3. Give effective feedback and plan on revision.
- Attendance Check
- Review
- 5W1H of peer review : PPT
- Relevant feedback of peer review : Video
Writing Peer Review TOP 10 Mistakes
- Expressions and strategies : Handout
- What is effective or not? : PPT
- 5 groups of 3 : Actual Peer Review : Worksheet
HOMEWORK
Final
Draft
REVISION
& Proofreading
Sep. 20th Thursday, 11:59pmName the file “Revised_Finaldraft_diagnostic_YOURNAME.doc"
Monday, September 17, 2012
Day 9 : Plagiarism
Day 9 : Plagiarism
OBJECTIVES
1. Understand the definition of plagiarism
2. Understand the consequences of plagiarism
3. Spot and recognize plagiarism in academic writing
4. Understand the strategies of avoiding plagiarism
- Attendance Check
- Review : Coherence - Transition
- Diagnostic Feedback
- Warm-up : I would not steal......
- Definition : On their own -> UIUC
- Plagiarism : definition/consequences
- Catch a

- Consolidation : Online Tutorial and Handout
http://library.acadiau.ca/tutorials/plagiarism/ <- Click!
Final Draft
Due to Sep. 18th Tuesday, 11:59pm
Name the file "Finaldraft_diagnostic_YOURNAME.doc"
Name the file "Finaldraft_diagnostic_YOURNAME.doc"
Thursday, September 13, 2012
Day 8 : Achieving Coherence
Day 8 : Achieving Coherence
OBJECTIVES
Understand the meaning of coherence
Understand the various methods of achieving coherence in writing
FLOW of the LESSON
- Attendance Check
- Review : PIE
- Transitions
as Coherence Device
- Coherence
- Word
Chain and KNO Analysis (if we have time.....)
HOMEWORK : SAME AS DAY 7 ⬅ Click
Wednesday, September 12, 2012
Day 7 : Homework 1st Draft of Diagnostic Revision
Day 7 : Homework 1st Draft of Diagnostic Revision
Diagnostic Essay Revisions (10% of final grade)
1st Draft
Due Sep. 14th Friday, 11:59pm
Name the file "Firstdraft_diagnostic_YOURNAME.doc"
Name the file "Firstdraft_diagnostic_YOURNAME.doc"
Final Draft
Due Sep. 19th Wednesday, 11:59pm
Name the file "Finaldraft_diagnostic_YOURNAME.doc"
TOPIC :
Type of Assignment: 5-paragraph essay
Name the file "Finaldraft_diagnostic_YOURNAME.doc"
TOPIC :
Should students be required
to participate in community service? Why
or why not?
Diagnostic Prompts Doc File DownloadType of Assignment: 5-paragraph essay
*Notice : subject to slight changes.
INTRODUCTION
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Points
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COMMENTS
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ORGANIZATION: 1Hook/Clincher grabs the reader’s attention immediately. 2Background
information sufficiently sets up the situation with unity, coherence and
development of ideas.
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THESIS STATEMENT: As
the last sentence in the
Introduction, it presents the overall purpose of the essay and a preview of
the topics discussed in the body paragraphs.
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SOURCE: Essay acknowledges
the author and title of Diagnostic
Article and its relation to the essay topic.
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BODY
PARAGRAPHS
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Points
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COMMENTS
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UNITY: All
sentences are directly connected
to the topic sentence/main idea. A strong topic sentence encompasses the main idea of the body paragraph. Each
includes a matching closing sentence
that concludes the paragraph.
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COHERENCE: Sentences
transition smoothly into one another using a varied vocabulary and applying
the necessary mechanical devices to maintain a flow.
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SUPPORT: Opinions
and Main Ideas are reinforced with relevant supporting details such as facts,
examples and statistics drawn from the diagnostic
article. Ideas are explained in a
detailed and specific manner and not
listed. Minimum of 5-6 sentences per paragraph
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CONCLUSION
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Points
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COMMENTS
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ORGANIZATION: It starts
out with a 1brief summary
and flows smoothly into broader discussion of the 2importance of the topic and a 3future/broader connection. Does not
introduce new information
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STYLE: The Clincher
is creative and effectively connects the introduction to the conclusion
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OVERALL
EVALUATION
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Points
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COMMENTS
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FORMATTING: Font
Times New Roman, Size 12, Double-Spaced, Margins 1-inch, Creative Title
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TONE: Essay is
appropriate for a general audience and maintains a professional, academic
tone throughout.
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CLARITY: Grammar errors and incorrect word
choices do not distract the reader from the important points
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OVERALL: Essay
adequately responds to the prompt provided by the Diagnostic Exam.
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