Saturday, September 29, 2012

Day14 : Library Day Review




Day14 : Library Day Review


It was really informative and productive.
I hope everybody learned something new. 
Please make the best use of what we learned.








Tuesday, September 25, 2012

Day14 : Library Day




Day14 : Library Day

Objectives : 
  • better understand the academic research process
  • effectively search for information using library databases. 



  1. HOMEWORK :
    Please click the link below.
    Get your questions ready! :)https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0Av0Ji-sKFWRkdFozNmpCREVhRHBHUUhyXzJGbHY2SWc
  2. TIME
    Sept. 28th, Friday, at 4pm sharp
    ,
    if you are late it will be tardy or absent. 
    Please do NOT BE LATE.

  3. LOCATION
    Come 
    DIRECTLY to the ACES Library, Room 509
           Graduate Assistant "Ashley Booth" will teach us. :)
ACES Library, Information and Alumni Center
1101 South Goodwin Avenue
Urbana, IL 61801

Click the following link to the map.
http://illinois.edu/map/view?buildingId=377&ACTION=MAP

DO NOT come to G3, FLB. Nobody’s will be there!

Day13 : Choosing a Topic



Day13 : Choosing a Topic




  • Review : What is a good topic?
  • Group Sharing and Discussion
  • Group Presentation : The Best Topic
  • Vote
  • Decision 
  • Homework 
  • To-do List 
  • Check the location of the library on the map.
  • Prepare at least one question to the instructor.
   

Sunday, September 23, 2012

Day12 : Research Process & Problem-Solution Paper



Day12 : Research Process & Problem-Solution Paper


Objectives :
1. Get excited about writing their own research paper and take their role of writer seriously.
2. Identify some distinguishing characteristics of an analytical research paper.
3. Indicate the various steps involved when writing a research paper and the order in which they occur




¤Significant

¤Solvable
¤Not to broad or too narrow
¤Of interest to you and the general public
¤Diverse sources
¤Causes and effects


Saturday, September 22, 2012

Day11 : Differences Between Essay and Research Paper



Day11 : Differences Between Essay and Research Paper



  • Read the excerpts carefully.
  • Analyze in terms of length, formality, source usage and outline structure.
  • Complete the “Differences Chart” and upload it to your dropbox folder 
    • by Sep. 23th, 11:59pm, Sunday.
  • Name the file “Differences_btw_essay_research_Yourname.doc.”

Thursday, September 20, 2012

Day11 : APA Formatting for Research Papers



Day11 : APA Formatting for Research Papers


Objectives :
1. Learn the basic formatting rules required for academic papers
                      – font, spacing, alignment, margins, and indentation


2. Find multiple ways to execute the formatting in Microsoft Word

3. Practice applying the formatting settings to sample texts


  • Attendance Checking
  • Review : Final Diagnostic
  • APA Formatting : Jigsaw Activity
  • Homework : Differences between Essays and Research Papers

✭ LIBRARY DAY ANNOUNCEMENT


•Sept. 28th, Friday, at 4pm sharp, if you are late it will be tardy or absent.
Please do NOT BE LATE.
•Come DIRECTLY to
the ACES Library, Room 509
DO NOT come here.
Nobody’s will be here.











Wednesday, September 19, 2012

Day10 : Homework


Day10 : Homework


1. About Plagiarism Online Tutorial 

    I forgot to collect all the homework today. (Yes i was too excited about peer-review!)

    Thanks to Anqi for reminding me of the worksheet. I will be collecting those again on Friday. If you are not finished yet, 

    and if you EVEN lost the paper, please download here ONLINE TUTORIAL


2. Revised Final Draft of Diagnostic

   Make sure you take into account several points mentioned in your peer-review form. 

   Please revise and proofread your draft again, so that you can finalize the essay.

   It is due tomorrow night, which is Sep. 20th, Thursday, 11:59PM.

   REMEMBER! This will be 10% of your final grade. 

  No excuses for plagiarism and late work.

   

3. Remember to bring your peer-review forms back to class on Friday. 

   THIS IS IMPORTANT! I will be checking on how you utilized all the given feedback.




Tuesday, September 18, 2012

Day10 : Peer Review



Day10 : Peer Review


OBJECTIVES

1. Understand the 5W1H of peer review and the relevant feedback.
2. Discuss language expressions and strategies used in peer review.
3. Give effective feedback and plan on revision.

  • Attendance Check
  • Review
  • 5W1H of peer review : PPT
  • Relevant feedback of peer review : Video
  • Writing Peer Review TOP 10 Mistakes

  • Expressions and strategies : Handout
  • What is effective or not? : PPT 
  • 5 groups of 3 : Actual Peer Review : Worksheet

HOMEWORK
Final Draft REVISION & Proofreading
Sep. 20th Thursday, 11:59pm
Name the file
“Revised_Finaldraft_diagnostic_YOURNAME.doc"
 

Monday, September 17, 2012

Day 9 : Plagiarism


Day 9 : Plagiarism


OBJECTIVES 
1. Understand the definition of plagiarism
2. Understand the consequences of plagiarism
3. Spot and recognize plagiarism in academic writing
4. Understand the strategies of avoiding plagiarism

  • Attendance Check
  • Review : Coherence - Transition
  • Diagnostic Feedback
  • Warm-up : I would not steal......
  • Definition : On their own -> UIUC
  • Plagiarism : definition/consequences
  • Catch a
  • Consolidation : Online Tutorial and Handout
    http://library.acadiau.ca/tutorials/plagiarism/ <- Click!

Diagnostic Essay Revisions (10% of final grade)

Final Draft
Due to Sep. 18th Tuesday, 11:59pm
Name the file "Finaldraft_diagnostic_YOURNAME.doc"


Thursday, September 13, 2012

Day 8 : Achieving Coherence



Day 8 : Achieving Coherence



OBJECTIVES

Understand the meaning of coherence

Understand the various methods of achieving coherence in writing


FLOW of the LESSON


  • Attendance Check
  • Review : PIE
  • Scrambled Sentences
  • Transitions as Coherence Device
      

  • Coherence








Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Day 7 : Homework 1st Draft of Diagnostic Revision




Day 7 : Homework 1st Draft of Diagnostic Revision



Diagnostic Essay Revisions (10% of final grade)

1st Draft
Due Sep. 14th Friday, 11:59pm
Name the file "Firstdraft_diagnostic_YOURNAME.doc"

Final Draft
Due Sep. 19th Wednesday, 11:59pm
Name the file "Finaldraft_diagnostic_YOURNAME.doc"


TOPIC :


Should students be required to participate in community service?  Why or why not?
Diagnostic Prompts Doc File Download

Type of Assignment: 5-paragraph essay


*Notice : subject to slight changes.


INTRODUCTION
Points
COMMENTS
ORGANIZATION: 1Hook/Clincher grabs the reader’s attention immediately. 2Background information sufficiently sets up the situation with unity, coherence and development of ideas.


THESIS STATEMENT: As the last sentence in the Introduction, it presents the overall purpose of the essay and a preview of the topics discussed in the body paragraphs.


SOURCE: Essay acknowledges the author and title of Diagnostic Article and its relation to the essay topic.





BODY PARAGRAPHS
Points
COMMENTS
UNITY: All sentences are directly connected to the topic sentence/main idea. A strong topic sentence encompasses the main idea of the body paragraph. Each includes a matching closing sentence that concludes the paragraph.


COHERENCE: Sentences transition smoothly into one another using a varied vocabulary and applying the necessary mechanical devices to maintain a flow.


SUPPORT: Opinions and Main Ideas are reinforced with relevant supporting details such as facts, examples and statistics drawn from the diagnostic article. Ideas are explained in a detailed and specific manner and not listed. Minimum of 5-6 sentences per paragraph





CONCLUSION
Points
COMMENTS
ORGANIZATION: It starts out with a 1brief summary and flows smoothly into broader discussion of the 2importance of the topic and a 3future/broader connection. Does not introduce new information


STYLE: The Clincher is creative and effectively connects the introduction to the conclusion





OVERALL EVALUATION
Points
COMMENTS
FORMATTING: Font Times New Roman, Size 12, Double-Spaced, Margins 1-inch, Creative Title


TONE: Essay is appropriate for a general audience and maintains a professional, academic tone throughout.


CLARITY: Grammar errors and incorrect word choices do not distract the reader from the important points


OVERALL: Essay adequately responds to the prompt provided by the Diagnostic Exam.